Some good work here but also some work missing Jay.
The Key Conventions was supposed to be about music magazines in general, not a particular title. It's ok now that you have done it - but add some analysis of how the 'rule of thirds' has been used in contents pages and double page spreads (see Fronter for guidance on this).
You still need to post your title block analysis and design, your drafts (scan in) and your focus group video. get this done asap.
Also, you school magazine cover and contents pages are missing. If these are not completed, you will lose 25% of marks from the main task!